The Thing Inside
Feb. 16th, 2010 05:00 pmSpoilers: Not really.
Disclaimer: I own nothing here and am just doing this for fun and to ease my new-found Leverage addiction.
Note: Recently, I fell in love with
moirariordan's writing style. She has such a lovely voice, both in terms of dialogue and internal monologue, but also in terms of overall style. She does interesting and subtle things with sentence length that made me want to try experimenting with it. (If you want to see what I'm talking about, read steady as she goes part one just for funsies, and then read part two for the voice. Pay special attention in part two to Eliot's thoughts in the hot tub.)
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Now you, you’re different. You fight like something’s trying to get out of you.
---Jed Rucker
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By the time he was in seventh grade, Eliot had lived in ten places. The shortest time in one place was four and a half months, the longest was twenty-three. Although the names and places, streets and faces changed, most things stayed pretty much the same.