Aww, I love this. Your narrative flow is just beautiful, I love the repetition of the "what you learned" lines. Great job with the second-person perspective, too - a lot of times, I find it kind of stilted and strange, but this wasn't at all. And now I know (as if I didn't already) that the beginning of Season 4 is likely to break my heart all over again.
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Date: 2009-07-21 06:35 pm (UTC)